Today I commented on Davids blog post about Fishy False teeth.
First I said my greetings to him. Talofa Lava david.
Next I said how I liked reading through his blog post. I loved reading your blog post.
Lastly I asked a question about his work. Why did you just write laugh instead you could just write ha ha.
I enjoyed commenting on David blog and I really hope david replies back.
Kia ora Josh,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a fantastic comment, I love how you were super positive and thoughtful in your approach! I also really liked how you explained what each section of your comment was for and why it was important. Ka pai!
I comment on a lot of blog posts and I follow a very similar structure! My favourite part of commenting is asking questions, just like you have! What are some more cool questions you could ask about people’s blogs?
Perhaps you could add some pictures and colours to make your post more engaging. For tips and tricks, follow this link.
Keep up the amazing work and happy blogging!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
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ReplyDeleteTēnā koutou Shannon
ReplyDeleteNice to meet you Shannon i'm a Panmure Bridge student. Maybe i'll try to show him a blog that i did and correct him next time.